Category: English 9 Daily Updates

Mid Term Final Update

The next test for the Mid Term Final is the in-class writing test. For this test, you will write an expository essay that is focused on an idea common to all three of the films. This essay is not about the films. Instead, it is about an idea. You will then develop the idea, using examples that include the films and other texts.

The original plan was to have a memorized portion focused on key terms. Based on the progress on Monday, I changed the test for Part 2. You will now start with a 20 minute speed write that reflects your knowledge of the system for writing an essay, including the 4 subsystems and the related cognitive tools. You do not need to memorize the study guide for this. Just come prepared to discuss your writing process and plans for the expository essay. We did this for classes that started on Tuesday and it worked well.

Friday’s schedule is changed, too. Instead of doing the key concepts test, you will have more time to work on your in-class essay test. At the end of this, you will write another speed write that demonstrates that you know how to use the systems, models, frameworks, and cognitive tools for writing an essay. We will do a new test (focused on the key concepts) on Friday April 5.

The April 5 Key Concepts Test will not change your grade for Term 1. It will be a Term 2 test, even though it’s done before the start of Term 2. That is because you will benefit from doing a required preview test for when you will need to complete the key concepts test for the Unit II Test and the Final Exam – but it’s too late in Term 1 to make this test change your grade. The timing for assessing the key concepts is all that has changed – these are still required concepts for the course. We will wait until April 5 to focus more on memorized understanding of the key concepts. Until then, we’ll focus on using the writing process to write an essay.

Here is the schedule for the rest of the week:

Period 2/4

  • Wednesday – Start the in-class writing test (speed write + essay work time)
  • Thursday – Work on the in-class writing test (essay work time + conferences)
  • Friday – 60 minutes for the in-class writing test + 20 minute speed write (key concepts)

Period 1/3

  • Wednesday – Work on the in-class writing test (essay work time + conferences)
  • Friday – 60 minutes for the in-class writing test + 20 minute speed write (key concepts)

Eng 9 Week Update Mar 4-8

Monday Mar 4 – Expository Essay Due Today

  • Period 1 – 8:45-10:05
    • Grade Assembly 8:50-9:15
    • Work Day 9:15-10:05
    • Turn in expository essay by 3:01 PM today
    • Sample Mid Term Exam packet is available today
    • Email home at 3:15 PM today if your expository essay is not at least partially completed and/or if you have missed any films
  • Period 2 – 10:13-11:33
    • Turn in expository essay by 3:01 PM today
    • Sample Mid Term Exam packet is available today
    • 10:15-11:30 – Course Selection Sessions
    • Email home at 3:15 PM today if your expository essay is not at least partially completed and/or if you have missed any films
  • Period 3 – 12:13-1:33
    • Work Day 12:13-1:33
    • Turn in expository essay by 3:01 PM today
    • Sample Mid Term Exam packet is available today
    • Email home at 3:15 PM today if your expository essay is not at least partially completed and/or if you have missed any films

Tuesday Mar 5 – Early Release or Eng 9 Catch-Up Afternoon

  • Period 1 – 8:45-10:10 AM
    • Work Day (expository essay, short story report, or study for exam)
  • Period 3 – 10:25-11:50 AM
    • Work Day (expository essay, short story report, or study for exam)
  • Catch Up Afternoon – 12:30-3:01 PM
  • SPT Interviews – 6:30-8:00 PM
    • Note – There will also be student-led conferences for students in Eng 9 with Mr. Kertes on these dates (sign up here):
      • Monday Apr 15 from 5:30-9:00 PM
      • Tuesday Apr 16 from 3:15-6:00 PM
      • Wednesday Apr 17 from 5:30-9:00 PM
      • Thursday Apr 18 from 5:30-9:00 PM
      • Friday Apr 19 from 3:15-6:00 PM

Wednesday Mar 6 – Mid-Term Exam Review (+Theories of Narrative and Outlines)

  • Period 1 – 8:45-10:05
    • Mid-Term Exam review
    • Outlines
    • Theories of Narrative
  • Period 2 – 10:13-11:33
    • Mid-Term Exam review
    • Outlines
    • Theories of Narrative
  • Period 3 – 12:13-1:33
    • Mid-Term Exam review
    • Mid-Term Exam review
    • Outlines
  • Theories of Narrative

Thursday Mar 7 – Early Release or Eng 9 Catch-Up Afternoon

  • Period 2 – 8:45-10:10 AM
    • Work Day (expository essay, short story report, or study for exam)
    • Course Selection (expect to be called to the MPR at some point this morning)
  • Period 4 – 10:25-11:50 AM
    • Work Day (expository essay, short story report, or study for exam)
  • Catch Up Afternoon – 12:30-3:01 PM

Friday Mar 8 – Mid-Term Preparation Day

  • Prepare for the Mid-Term Exam
    • Repeat of “The Giving Tree” lesson (take notes for the Learning Story Test)
    • Go over the packets that will be part of the exam (advance reading)
    • Go over the notes (notes that you can bring to the exam for certain portions)
    • Review the films (including going over scripts and passages)

Next Week – Mid-Term Exam Week

If you have not at least partially completed the expository essay, you will work on this during the exam and can start the exams once the essay is at least partially completed. You can then make up missed exam portions on the Make Up Day (Apr 22) or on a Homework Help (most Mondays after school, be sure to schedule an appointment).

If you have missed a film, you will view the film before starting the exam. You will do this during the exams and can later complete the exams on the Make Up Day (Apr 22) or on a Homework Help (most Mondays after school, be sure to schedule an appointment).

  • Monday Mar 11:
    • Learning Story Test
  • Tuesday Mar 12, Wednesday Mar 13, Thursday Mar 14:
    • In-Class Writing Test
  • Friday Mar 15
    • Key Concepts Test

Eng 9 Review So Far

Week 1 – Jan 29 to Feb 2

  • Started preparing for the expository essay
  • Started preparing for the in-class writing test
  • Started preparing for the learning story test
  • Started preparing for the mid term key concepts test
  • Started preparing for the textual analysis essay (by reading “The Outsiders”)
  • Started preparing for the short story report
  • Watched “Romeo and Juliet” to prepare for the expository essay and in-class writing test
  • Learned about the Five Fs (to use for the essay and writing test) (will be on the mid term exam)
  • Learned about the Levels of Analysis (to use for the essay and writing test) (will be on the mid term exam)
  • Learned how writing is a system to make thinking visible
  • Learned what a system is and learned the elements of a system
  • Introduced to writing as a process (the six stages of writing)
  • Read the poem “Doesn’t every poet write a poem about unrequited love” and did initial textual analysis (alliteration and sensory imagery)
  • Read the poem “Stop All the Clocks” and connected it to the movie “Four Weddings and Funeral”
  • Connected the texts to “reading between the lines”
  • Learned about the course theme of “The Power of Love”

Week 2 – Feb 5 to Feb 9

  • Watched the film “All Is True” to prepare for the expository essay and in-class writing test
  • Discussed how to develop a focusing question for an expository essay and textual analysis essay
  • Wrote reflections on why Shakespeare wrote plays and why we still view his plays to this day
  • Discussed the LOAs of connection and reflection – especially in terms of the film “All Is True”
  • Discussed these themes in relation to the film:
    • Reading between the lines
    • Reading as time travel
    • Reading as mind-melding
    • Love (romantic, friendship, family)
    • Power
    • Relationships
  • Read the story “One Good Man” in preparation for the expository essay
  • Learned that the definition of “theory” is “explains how or why using rigorous and systematic thinking” and learned why theory is useful (it helps you understand and explain reality)
  • Learned that essays in English class must focus on a thesis and that the thesis (point of the paper) must be theory-based (must explain how or why, must reflect rigour, and must reflect systematic thinking)
  • Reviewed the Levels of Analysis, Five Fs, Systems-Thinking, and Six Stages of Writing (connecting these subsystems as part of the larger system of writing as a process for making thinking visible)
  • Reviewed the format requirements for homework, speed writes, and quizzes

Week 3 – Feb 12 to 14

  • Caught up on work during work periods
  • Students were provided with examples for all work
  • Students were provided with 3 days of class to catch up on all homework, speed writes, notes, quizzes
  • Students met with the teacher for conferences to review the key concepts, go over missing assignments, and get help catching up
  • Time was provided for students to read “One Good Man,” “The Laundry Basket,” “The Promise,” “Haida Gwaii,” “Million Porcupines…,” “My Conversations with Canadians,” “Doesn’t every poet write a poem about unrequited love,” and “Funeral Blues.”
  • We reviewed the expository essay assignment – more detail of what is required was provided to help as students completed the readings and other exercises to prepare for this essay assignment

Week 4 – Feb 20 to Feb 23

  • Read “He Likes to Dance” and “Like a Prayer” and read an article on “Like a Prayer” to prepare for this reading (this will be part of a later lesson after Spring Break on textual analysis)
  • Completed the Wondering Stage of the expository essay assignment and moved to the Preparing Stage and Planning Stage
  • The due date for the Short Story Report was moved to one week later (is now due March 8th)
  • The due date for the Poetry Reflection Report was to after Spring Break
  • The poetry packet assignments were moved to after Spring Break
  • We read “The Giving Tree” as an example for the Preparing Stage
  • We learned how to make a Focus Funnel and we applied this to “The Giving Tree”
  • We watched “Shakespeare in Love” to prepare for the expository essay and in-class writing test

Week 5 – Feb 26 to Mar 1

  • This was a work week
  • We learned about metacognition as connected to learning theory and were introduced to Vygotsky’s theory of the Zone of Proximal Development – to prepare for the learning story test during the Mid Term exam
  • We went over the study guide for the Mid Term exam
  • We had several days to write the expository essay and time was provided for one on one conferences as students worked on the essay
  • The main learning target for the week was knowing how to write a thesis (theory-based, one that explains how or why using rigorous and systematic thinking)

What is next – Week 6 – Mar 4 to Mar 8

  • The expository essay is due Mar 4 and the Short Story Report is due Mar 8
  • Time is provided during Catch Up Afternoons (early release days on Tues and Thurs from 12:30-3:00 to finish the expository essay)
  • Progress report will be emailed home if your expository essay is not completed by the due date
  • We will complete the following homework and quizzes in-class (this is the last time we will have time to do this – after spring break you must do this work during the work days or as homework):
    • The Importance of Theory
    • Homework #5
    • Homework #6
    • Quiz #4 – Elements of a System
  • On Fri Mar 8… we will start the Mid Term Exam with time to prepare notes, preview readings, and do other activities to help you get the test done in the time provided next week
  • We will also review for the Mid Term Exam throughout the week

What is next – Week 7 – Mar 11 to Mar 15 – Mid Term Exam Week

If you have not yet at least partially completed the expository essay exam, you will do this before you can start the exam. Time is provided to do this during class.

If you have missed any of the three films, you will view the films during the exam periods first. Only once you have viewed the films can you take the exam – as the films are required to be able to complete the exams.

The test is based on the following readings and other texts covered so far this term:

You should read (in advance of the Mid Term Exam) the following:

  • Monday – Learning Story Test
    • Using all five Levels of Analysis, write a 5-paragraph learning story of the lesson on “The Giving Tree”.
  • Tuesday/Wednesday/Thursday – In-Class Writing Test
    • Write a 5-paragraph expository essay that relates to a theme (or connected topic of subtopic) common to the films Romeo and Juliet, All Is True, and Shakespeare in Love.
  • Friday – Key Concepts Test (closed note)
    • Demonstrate: Draw a Focus Funnel (complete, in the correct order)
    • Define: Expository Essay, System, Theory, Thesis, Theme, Topic, Subtopic, Outline, Feature of Text, Paragraph, Section, Topic Sentence, Key Idea, Process
    • Describe and Explain: Five Fs of Writing (list all, define all, list related tools for each, explain how and why to use); Levels of Analysis (list all, define all, list related questions for each, explain how and why to use); Six Stages of Writing (list all, define all, explain how and why to use); System (list elements, define each element, explain how and why to use)
    • Connect: Explain how you used the Five Fs so far this term; Explain how you used the Levels of Analysis so far this term; Explain how you used the Six Stages of Writing so far this term; Explain how writing is a system for making thinking visible; Connect to the four subsystems of
      this system covered so far this term.
    • Reflect: Explain the value of making writing visible; Explain the value of theory; Explain the value of systems-thinking, especially in terms of the writing process.

If you miss portions of the exam, you may schedule Homework Help on most Mondays after school to make up any missed portions of the Mid Term Exam.

Eng 9 (1/3) Update Feb 27

Today was a long day for Per 1 and Per 3 Eng 9.

The entire period was focused on writing the expository essay.

Mr. Kertes conferenced with each student to go over the essay and students’ other work so far for the term. The first Informal Learning Update will be provided on Wed Feb 28. The next one goes out on Mar 4, which is the due date for the essay.

We will continue working on the essay on Wed Feb 28.

Eng 9 Feb 26 Update

Today we:

  • Continued The Outsiders novel study reading
  • Looked over the calendar and adjusted some of the due dates
    • The expository essay is still due Mar 4
    • The short story report is now due Mar 8
    • The poetry reflection report is now due Apr 5
    • You must view the film before you can start the Mid Term Exam
      • Watch it in class (attend class on the day of the viewing)
      • Watch in homework help (most Mondays after school, be sure to schedule this), on a Catch Up Afternoon (12:30-3:00 on Mar 5 and Mar 7) or on a Make Up Day
      • Watch at home (get parent/guardian note + write 5-paragraph summary essay of the film)
      • Watch during test day and then make up the test during homework help, catch up afternoon, or make up day
    • You must have at least partially completed the expository essay before you can start the Mid Term Exam
  • Went over the study guide for the Mid Term exam
  • We did not have time to go over narrative theory, so this will not be part of the expository essay (we will cover this on Friday so that you can use this part of the cognitive toolbox for the next essay, including for the Mid Term exam in-class essay)
  • Completed Quiz 3
    • What are the levels of analysis?
    • What is metacognition?
    • How is metacognition used in this class?
    • Who was Lev Vygotsky?
    • What are the levels of the “ZPD Target”?
    • Draw the ZPD Target and Cognitive Toolbox.
  • Completed Homework 4
    • Write a 3-4 sentence summary of the article on Madonna’s “Like a Prayer” song.
  • Completed Speed Write 13 (Metacognition)
  • Completed Speed Write 15 (Expository essay idea)

Here are photos from the board:

Eng 9 Feb 26-Mar 1 Weekly Update

Mon Feb 26

  • NOVEL STUDY
    • “The Outsiders”
  • LESSON 1
    • Quiz #3 (this will be quick and you do not need to study for it)
    • Homework #4 (we do this together in-class and you do not need to do it before class)
    • Poetry Packet #3 and #4 (quick overview)
    • Poetry Packet #5 and #6 (quick overview)
    • Prepare for Homework #5 (due Friday Mar 1)
    • Prepare for Homework #6 (due Friday Mar 8)
    • Prepare for Quiz #4 (study guide will be provided – the quiz will be on Fri Mar 1)
    • Mid-Term Exam Study Guide (preview only – review day is next week on Wed Mar 6)
  • STUDY HALL
  • LESSON 2
    • Theory (rigorous and systematic thinking that explains how or why)
      • Narrative Construction of Reality (Bruner)
      • My Conversations with Canadians (Maracle)
      • The Truth About Stories (King)
    • Review the Six Stages of Writing
    • Review the Five Fs
    • Review the Levels of Analysis
    • Review Systems- Thinking
  • SPEED WRITE
    • SW#13 – Metacognition
    • SW#14 – Narrative Theory

Tues Feb 27

  • NOVEL STUDY
    • “The Outsiders”
  • LESSON 1
    • Work Day – Work on Expository Essay, Short Story Report, and/or YA Romance Novel Study
    • Essay Writing Process Conferences
  • STUDY HALL (5 min)
  • LESSON 2
    • Work Day – Work on Expository Essay, Short Story Report, and/or YA Romance Novel Study
    • Essay Writing Process Conferences
  • STUDY HALL (5 min)
  • LESSON 3
    • Work Day – Work on Expository Essay, Short Story Report, and/or YA Romance Novel Study
    • Essay Writing Process Conferences

Wed Feb 28

  • NOVEL STUDY
    • “The Outsiders”
  • LESSON 1
    • Work Day – Work on Expository Essay, Short Story Report, and/or YA Romance Novel Study
    • Progress Report Conferences
  • STUDY HALL (5 min)
  • LESSON 2
    • Work Day – Work on Expository Essay, Short Story Report, and/or YA Romance Novel Study
    • Progress Report Conferences
  • SPEED WRITE
    • SW#15 – Big Idea

Thurs Feb 29

  • NOVEL STUDY
    • “The Outsiders”
  • LESSON 1
    • Work Day – Work on Expository Essay, Short Story Report, and/or YA Romance Novel Study
    • Essay Writing Process Conferences
  • STUDY HALL (5 min)
  • LESSON 2
    • Work Day – Work on Expository Essay, Short Story Report, and/or YA Romance Novel Study
    • Essay Writing Process Conferences
  • STUDY HALL (5 min)
  • LESSON 3
    • Work Day – Work on Expository Essay, Short Story Report, and/or YA Romance Novel Study

Fri Mar 1Short Story Report Due

  • NOVEL STUDY
    • “The Outsiders”
  • LESSON 1
  • STUDY HALL (5 min)
  • LESSON 2
    • Narrative Theory
  • SPEED WRITE
    • SW#16 – Importance of Theory

Next Week – Mar 4 to Mar 8

  • Mon Mar 4 – Work Day (Expository Essay is due today)
  • Tues Mar 5 – Work Day (early release, unless you have missing work)
    • Students with missing assignments are expected to attend the Catch Up Afternoon today (12:30-3:00)
  • Wed Mar 6Review Day for the Mid Term
    • Self-Assessment Activity
  • Thurs Mar 7 – Work Day (early release, unless you have missing work)
    • Students with missing assignments are expected to attend the Catch Up Afternoon today (12:30-3:00)
  • Fri Mar 8Mid Term Exam Prep Day (pre-readings and notes)
    • Self-Assessment Activity Make Up

Mid Term Exam Week – Mar 11 to Mar 15

Mid Term Exam study guide (PDF)

If you have not viewed the films yet, you can do this during the Exam Week starting on Mon. If you have not at least partially completed the expository essay, you can do this during the Exam Week. Once the films are viewed and the expository essay is at least partially completed, you can start the exam. There is a make up day on April 22 or on most Mondays after school. You can make up any missed days of the exam during one of these make up days.

  • Mon Mar 11 – Learning Story Test
  • Tues Mar 12 – In-Class Writing Test
  • Wed Mar 13 – In-Class Writing Test
  • Thurs Mar 14 – In-Class Writing Test
  • Fri Mar 15 – Key Concepts (closed note, memorized portion of the exam)

Mr. Kertes is an English teacher in Prince Rupert, in the territory of the Ts’msyen, at Charles Hays Secondary School - home of the Rainmakers.